'Like flies they’d hang around, pestering the hell out
him until he finally got up the energy to do something about them. And then
‘slam, bam’ dead.'
“This is how you’re starting
it?” Crispin shook his head as he looked over his brother’s shoulder at the
screen.
“I thought it would catch
the reader’s interest, Spin.”
“Oh it’ll do that, Bry.
They’ll wonder what kind of strange kook you’re writing about.”
The smile on Bryant’s face
was knowing and challenging. “Us?”
Moving to rest one hip on
the edge of the desk Crispin looked at Bryant in feigned surprise. “You’re
kidding.”
“Told you I was going to write our story one
day.”
“So who’s the ‘he’ in that
sentence, you or me?”
“Either/or, does it matter?
No one’s going to know anyway. I just haven’t decided whether to tell it all or
just start with the next one. Any druthers on your part?”
Crispin tapped his lips
reflectively. “The next one for starters. You can always go back and add the
others in later.”
“In that case, we’ve got to
decide what that one will be.” Bryant clicked on a Word document, bringing up
the list and they both studied it. “That one has possibilities, if we can find
the right person.”
“Shouldn’t be too hard, all
we have to do is drive from here into the city. We’ll see plenty of them. It’s
just a case of picking one.”
“Or this, if we feel like
taking in a movie.”
“Check and see if there’s
one we can tolerate,” Crispin replied, “Something popular and loud, with lots
of explosions and car chases.”
Bryant’s smile turned malevolent. “That should
draw them in.”
I'll be interested to see where this one goes! Different you say? I'll be reading!!
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