The police officer picked up
the skull with gloved hands, turning it enough so that he could examine the
interior. "You're correct, sir," he said, speaking to Micah.
"There is definitely dirt still clinging to the inside." Turning to
the others he asked, "How many people would have handled this besides you,
Mr. VilarĂ³?"
"Good question,"
Kirk replied. "Whichever prop person put it there for starters, right
Micah?" Micah nodded. "And, I suppose anyone else who was around
today, though why they would have is the question."
Chandler added, "The
two men playing the gravediggers could have. Probably did actually."
The officer almost smiled.
"Maybe I should ask who wouldn't have handled this. I guess we'll
fingerprint everyone on the premises and go from there." He carefully
bagged the skull, saying as he did, "I suspect it's just someone playing a
prank, thinking it would be cute to try to scare you, Mr. VilarĂ³."
"Then
he failed, because he didn't scare me, though it did throw me a bit. If he
wanted the full effect he should have waited 'til opening night."
With
a nod, the officer asked Chandler if he'd gather the cast together so he and
his partner could get fingerprints. Then they'd deal with everyone else in the
building.
* * * *
When a police officer
appeared in the doorway of the costume shop, Ross' first thought was that for
some reason security had called them in about whoever had been messing around there
after hours. So that was the first thing he asked the officer. The man shook
his head, requesting that Ross to explain.
Once he'd finished, Ross of
course asked why he was there. He frowned as he listened, asking the office
when he was done, "Could it be the same person doing this?"
"It certainly makes
sense to think so," the man replied as he got ready to fingerprint Ross
and his crew.
When he'd left, fifteen
minutes later, Beth came over to Ross, asking softly enough that the others
couldn't overhear, "Do you think this is aimed at the two of you for some reason?"
Ross looked at her in
surprise, about to reply to the negative, and then paused as he thought about
the question. "Interesting idea," he replied after a moment,
"Although I don't see why anyone would have it in for us, even in a joking
way."
"Jealousy?" She
smiled slightly. "Maybe I read too many romance novels but this is the
kind of thing the bad guy would do to try to mess with your heads."
"Then he's SOL because
we'd be more likely to pull together than split up."
"I know that, but some
people live in hope and have no brains to back it up. At least in the novels. I
guess in real life it was probably all a coincidence."
"I'm sure it was.
Someone thinking they're being cute is all. It's almost too bad Chandler called
the cops. If we had ignored what happened, whoever is doing this would probably
see it wasn't worth continuing."
"Or they'd up the
ante," Beth countered before going back to work.
"God I hope not,"
Ross muttered. "I've got too much to do as it is, without worrying about
some nutcase."
It reads so real. Again, you could give a class on dialogue. In fact, you should. I would take it. You are so incredibly good at it. I am just reading along and truly getting into it and BAM! The end. Dang it. Anyway, love it. Always do. Can't wait for more!
ReplyDeleteThank you. I would much rather write dialogue than descriptions. Trust me. I'm one of those 'So what if he's wearing a red shirt? If it doesn't advance the character, it doesn't matter.' At least to my way of thinking. What they say says more about a character than the color of the sofa they're sitting on, or the type of floor they're pacing, if that makes sense.
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